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Scenes From A Dramatic Relationship. 
By Gino Cirignano
Published July 2000

At the time, I was a freelance writer of a weekly newspaper column that dealt with a subject we are all too familiar with. As the "Dear Abby of Driving", my weekly dialogues in print were an educational motoring experience for my readers as well as myself.  

I was also dabbling in scriptwriting.  My partner and I had developed several TV sitcom pilots and one was real close to being a done deal.  In other words, we really liked it.

Fast forward to my girlfriend at the time (a struggling actress in LA dating a would-be scriptwriter -- now that's original) who wanted me to try my hand at writing a "3-Minute Audition Scene". This is one of those one-person monologues, she explained, where I could showcase her considerable talents. And one more thing -- it had to have a unique twist.  

Oh, is that all?  I thought about it for a while and was having trouble coming up with the right angle. But then it hit me!  I remembered hearing about one of those 'so strange it had to be true' stories and began formulating the plot that eventually expanded into the one-woman act that follows.

No, I never got to see her perform the scene, in case you were wondering. Our relationship closed in New Haven. Never made it to Broadway. But it was close to being a done deal. And we really liked it…

 

THE RAPE By Gino Cirignano
A One Woman Play

FADE IN:  
INT. STAGE WITH SINGLE SPOTLIGHT 
(OUR ACTRESS IS CENTER STAGE WITH HER BACK TO THE AUDIENCE,  AS SHE SLOWLY TURNS AROUND TO SPEAK…)

ACTRESS:

Have you ever been raped?  Let me tell you about it.  First, you have to understand that it’s something you never fully recover from. Psychologically, it’s devastating.  The rapist has a power over you that you can never outlive. The shame, the humiliation. Thinking that maybe you had something to do with it.  Feeling guilty for even being there…

(SHE CLEARS HER THROAT AND BEGINS WALKING, STAGE LEFT.)

ACTRESS:

How do you face your lover?  Your kids? Your family never really understands or looks at you the same way again.  In their eyes, you have been desecrated - soiled - you are something dirty.  I guess it’s like someone who moves after being burglarized.  It never feels like their home again.  They’ve been violated.  But when you’ve been raped, you can’t move into another body.  And your lover feels like it isn’t theirs anymore.  You belong to the rapist from that point on…

(SHE WALKS BACK TO CENTER STAGE)

ACTRESS:

And just when you start to lead a normal life again, you’ll see someone who looks like your rapist.  Or you’ll flash to that moment when the knife was at your neck or the gun was at your head.

You wake up in the middle of the night and you can feel your rapist’s touch.  Having your clothes and humanity ripped off  your person.  And you feel ripped off!  Mad as hell!  And powerless. Remembering how you thought you were going to die - and wishing you did…

(SHE STARTS TO CRY OR LAUGH?)

ACTRESS:

Being raped is like dying.  A very real part of you is taken away and never comes back.  The nightmare is the part that is alive has to live with it.  All you know is that you’ll never be the same again…

(SITTING ON A STOOL, A FEW FEET STAGE LEFT)

ACTRESS:

So, how do I know so much about it?  I know - because…

(PHONE RINGS SUDDENLY FROM OFF-STAGE)

ACTRESS:

Oh, my God!  I can’t answer that!  What if…?

(PHONE STOPS RINGING)

ACTRESS:

What kind of life is this?  This has got to stop! Rape counselors say it’s a natural reaction. They call it post-traumatic stress syndrome.  All victims of violent crime know what I mean…

(SHE LOOKS UP HIGH)

Maybe the rapist isn’t just around the corner, or behind the bush or hiding in your closet - but try convincing someone of that when they are alone.  They say it’s something you have to learn to live with.  If they only knew…

(PHONE STARTS RINGING AGAIN)

Hell, that call could be news about a free trip I’ve won, or free tickets to a Broadway  show!  Wow!  How nice it would be to go out on the town, dinner for two, a play, a carriage ride through Central Park…

(SHE STOPS TALKING AND STANDS, FROZEN)

ACTRESS:

That’s where it happened.  Late at night, walking through the Park.  We should all know better, right?  Well, some of us ask for it.  And some of us will never feel safe in that Park - or this city - again.

(SHE MOVES CLOSER TO THE AUDIENCE)

I can recall every detail.  I can feel it, breathe it, taste it - like it was yesterday.  Because I’ve been there.  And you know something…?

(OUR ACTRESS STARES OUT AT THE AUDIENCE AND A BIG SMILE SPREADS ACROSS HER FACE…)

ACTRESS:

…I loved it!  Watching that guy beg for mercy.  My girlfriend pointing a gun at his head - as he had to give me everything I wanted!

(SHE LAUGHS WITH SATISFACTION)

ACTRESS:

All the rape victims I have counseled.  Hearing

(PAUSES, CONTEMPLATING.)

Sure, he can identify me - which is why I won’t answer the phone or open the door.  But just let him go to the police with how these two weak, defenseless females had their way with him….

(LAUGHING OUT LOUD)

We’ve come a long way, baby…

(SHE WINKS AT THE AUDIENCE AND TURNS TO LEAVE)

Besides, who says guys have all the fun?  I guess you can say, pay-back really is a bitch

FADE OUT:

THE END
"The Rape" © Gino Cirignano, 9/18/98

Gino Cirignano is a Computer Software Instructor and Freelance Writer who wrote the "Road Scholar" driving advice column every Sunday for seven years in the Copley Los Angeles Newspapers.  Gino also wrote and self-published a safe driving guide called, "Crosstown Trafffic" and developed a website on the world of driving at: http://members.aol.com/roadscho/ He lives with his wife in California.

 
 
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